Tolfaramir's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Monty Python's rabbit]

wrong script

yeah you messed up the most classic line in the film "run away". you retard! its was aweful just aload of drawings and you trying to do the accents!

[Monkey Island Flash Movie]

Aweseom

Great laugh!

[Thamesis - Episode 5]

I didn't get it

I really thought the script was almost non-existant and there was nothing to it, just sceen shots mixed together. Very unique but very boring at the same time, too much of an art feel to it. Reminds me of the toilet seat in the art gallery.

[StarCraft: Alliance]

Marines

Very well put together I like it!
Marines and most of the terran force are drugged up as to not have feelings, I'm wondering why in your animation they can joke and have built up certain relationships with each other?

[StarCraft: Reconnoiter]

That was great!

Starcraft is one of my favourite games of all times and I've never seen a really good starcraft animation up until now. That was awsome, the fights were there, the protoss, terran and did I see a zerg in the shadows? The lips were abit dodgy but nothing major was really wrong with that. I'm tempted to watch it again.

LogFish responds:

Sorry I didn't put a decent scene selector in it to help you out there - I will in the next one :) I'll lip sync properly in the next one too, cheers!

[Jedi Scum]

Jedi...

Jedi's can't do that lightning attack, only siths can.

Apart from that, it was good, seems you have your own style. There was abit of humour in there that was not very funny after the 3rd time of switching views. But apart from that it was good, I hope you make another one but with alittle more fighting in there, or a story.

hatestartrek responds:

...You dont know obi-wan, neither do I, but maybe its a halv evil and tottaly evil jedi... that would conclude him to be sith... dammit!
-by the way: hvor gammel blir en ræv?

[Warrior Boarder 3]

How did this ever make front page?

You can see where hes tried animating and missed out the lines around the arms because hes just twisting the object!!!!

The people are misshaped, everything about it is bad!

[PALADIN episode 4]

Getting Better...

I watched this some time ago but was waiting for more people to post reviews. From reading your friends review it promoted me to write. Your friend speaks strongly about what you and him have put together which is acceptable.

I do agree with his points, since watching the animations each time they're released, they're getting slightly better. Yet I wonder about the where this is going, it seems rather predictable and corny. Some have said that you've taken it from other stories, but that is where all the best stories come from. For example, who invented elves and dwarfs and dragons? Someone had to, but just because a film has a dragon in doesn't mean that its all related to the same one.

Overall I was pleased with what I saw, but I'm still waiting for the big battle or something spectacular.

[Alienz]

Low Score

Not as good as your braveheart one. You just seem to be running out of original ideas not that you had any. The drawings where good, animation was awful and the content was just so boring. It was like watching Alien, but an even worse interpretation of an already terrible film.

[Brave Farce]

Fantastic Drawings

For your first animation it was brilliant. I loved the way you had drawn your characters, I thought they looked very real but cartoon style at the same time.

I'd have liked to see some more action in the film to comment on your animation skills. The mouth sync was out alot, you just seemed to have it openening and shouting randomly when the voice came on, but a good effort.

I liked the part of the movie that you choose, but like I said, it could have done with some action to make it really good. Perhaps it would have made the animation too long, but a bit of editting wouldn't have gone missing to show major parts of the battle.